Tuesday, March 17, 2009

It weighs down his ears

bites his fingers

gnaws on his bones

the black vapour that fills his eyes

    

suffocates the room

its convoluted wraith-like forms

binding the tongue

     

whispered, admitted, found

innocently

chokes the mind

incoherently 

    

A Secret.

5 comments:

Comfortably Numb said...

Choking & strangulating the conscience
Lets him deviate into deep waters
Not knowing if it kills or not
Secret is only good. Till it excites.

Cheers!!

Lemon Girl said...

Well andy, you've written it so beautifully.
-anty

Ishita_Dasgupta said...

Ummmm..I wonder what inspired you for this one..?!

I like it, I think. :P

Interestingly done, in your very own special writing style, of course. ;)

Radhika Saxena said...

Ahaan.
I like :D
Love short sentenced poems,just love the fullstop business,so totally my thing :D :D

Sorry by the time I got over my laziness,went to your profile to take the blog link,it was off your profile :|
[Hoping you remember who I am :|,if you don't,just in case,Benzene Ring,electron cloud :D,I'm sure yknw now!! :D]

Lalaland said...

Ahh!
I actually understood this in the first read. Wasn't able to get the one above.

I'll say it again. I love your way with the abstract!!

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