It weighs down his ears
bites his fingers
gnaws on his bones
the black vapour that fills his eyes
suffocates the room
its convoluted wraith-like forms
binding the tongue
whispered, admitted, found
innocently
chokes the mind
incoherently
A Secret.
There is hair Everywhere Behind my knees Between that crease, In my nose Between my brows And just yesterday I Found one on my chin Perhaps...
5 comments:
Choking & strangulating the conscience
Lets him deviate into deep waters
Not knowing if it kills or not
Secret is only good. Till it excites.
Cheers!!
Well andy, you've written it so beautifully.
-anty
Ummmm..I wonder what inspired you for this one..?!
I like it, I think. :P
Interestingly done, in your very own special writing style, of course. ;)
Ahaan.
I like :D
Love short sentenced poems,just love the fullstop business,so totally my thing :D :D
Sorry by the time I got over my laziness,went to your profile to take the blog link,it was off your profile :|
[Hoping you remember who I am :|,if you don't,just in case,Benzene Ring,electron cloud :D,I'm sure yknw now!! :D]
Ahh!
I actually understood this in the first read. Wasn't able to get the one above.
I'll say it again. I love your way with the abstract!!
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